Rival Schools page

This is a redrawing of a page from the first Udon Rival Schools comic. I wanted to draw it in my own style with some changes.

Just trying to get use to drawing pages, and using traditional drawing tools. I decided to try drawing the word bubbles into the art to see if it could save me time.

I am thinking I should work digital. The inking would have come out cleaner, and the lines a lot straighter.